Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Your New Best Friend: The TEP Paragraph

Technique – Effect – Purpose Paragraph

1. In “Title of Essay,” [author] uses [rhetorical strategy] to [achieve his purpose – do not use the word purpose in your paragraph; in your topic sentence, you should directly state what the author hopes to achieve.]

2. Establish the context of the first quotation.

3. Quote the text. Never use a quotation as its own sentence. When writing about diction, you might want to quote a “series” of “Words” or “phrases” instead of a complete sentence (Kline 22). Follow the quotation with the author’s name and the page number in parentheses. Artful writers might combine steps two and three in a single sentence. If you are not confident in your ability to properly format a quotation, visit this link for some excellent advice: http://www.virtualsalt.com/quotehlp.htm

4. Analyze the quotation. How does this help you prove the author’s technique achieves her purpose? Focus on the effect on the reader. NO MORE than two sentences of analysis.

5. Repeat steps two through four with a second example. The second example should show how the author develops or elaborates on the argument. When possible, use quotations from different parts of the essay. Use your examples in chronological order, unless there is a very clear reason not to.

6. Close your paragraph.


General Notes:
  • Strive for a formal tone.
  • No first person.
  • Don't evaluate the text. You just need to explain how it works.
  • Authors establish ethos, employ logos, and appeal to pathos.

Monday, October 13, 2014

Agenda, October 13

Due Now: Optional revision of your Object essay. Paper clip your new draft on top of your previous draft. Highlight the changes to your new draft. Highlight the changes before you come to class. If you choose not to revise your essay, please return it to me to put into your file.   
Due Now: "Women's Brains," by Stephen Jay Gould, in The Language of Composition. 
Due Thursday: Typed, double spaced TEP Paragraph about any rhetorical device in "Women's Brains."    
  1. Are you in a fix?
  2. I was worried I was wrong ...
  3. Dissecting "Women's Brains"

    Wednesday, October 8, 2014

    Agenda, October 8

    Due Now: "Superman and Me," by Sherman Alexie, in The Language of Composition. Says/Does/Because, please.       
    Due Monday, 10/13: Optional revision of your Object essay. Paper clip your new draft on top of your previous draft. Highlight the changes to your new draft. Highlight the changes before you come to class. If you choose not to revise your essay, please return it to me to put into your file. 
    Due Monday: "Women's Brains," by Stephen Jay Gould, in The Language of Composition.    
    1. A mirror ball: Whole class disco self-reflection
    2. Per 4: Is it about race or about reading?
    3. Per 5: Common knowledge
    4. TEP. Finally.

    Tuesday, October 7, 2014

    Agenda, October 7

    Due Now: "None of this is Fair," by Richard Rodriguez      
    Due Now: "Superman and Me," by Sherman Alexie, in The Language of Composition. Says/Does/Because, please.     
    Due Monday, 10/13: Optional revision of your Object essay. Paper clip your new draft on top of your previous draft. Highlight the changes to your new draft. Highlight the changes before you come to class. If you choose not to revise your essay, please return it to me to put into your file.    
    1. None of this is Wrinkled
    2. Search and Destroy Rhetorical Devices
    3. A Super-Structured Discussion

    Monday, October 6, 2014

    Agenda, October 6

    Due Now: "None of this is Fair," by Richard Rodriguez    
    Due Now: "Superman and Me," by Sherman Alexie, in The Language of Composition. Says/Does/Because, please.    
    Due Now: Final Draft of Injustice Narrative. Staple your revised copy on top of your peer reviewed copy. Don't forget to re-underline your rhetorical strategies.  
    Due Monday, 10/13: Optional revision of your Object essay. If you choose not to revise your essay, please return it to me to put into your file.    
    1. Here come the papers!
    2. An unfair discussion
    3. Diction TEP
    4. A Super discussion

    Friday, October 3, 2014

    Inside the mind of Kline


    Here's what I ask myself every time I finish reading one of your essays: 

    Is it a story?
    Does it have a clear beginning, middle, and end (not necessarily in that order)?
    Does it deepen the reader’s understanding of the subject?

    Is it well organized?
    Do the events come in the best order?
    Are the transitions between ideas smooth and logical?
    Is the opening precise, specific, and engaging? Is it the intro that only this author can write?
    Are paragraphs fully developed (with appropriate details or adequate examples)?
    Does the closing effectively emphasize, elaborate, or illuminate the main ideas of the story?

    Is the language interesting?
    Does the writer make precise, powerful diction choices?
    Does the writer employ rhetorical strategies that engage the reader and emphasize the purpose?
    Are appeals to ethos, pathos, and logos balance, effective, and appropriate for audience and purpose?
    Does the writer include a sufficient amount of showing?
    Does the writer take risks?

    Does this look like a college paper?
    Does it follow MLA format?
    Does it display a college-level control of spelling, grammar, and punctuation?
    Did the writer meet the requirements of the assignment, including the nit-picky details?

    Agenda, October 3

    Due Friday, 10/3: Write a narrative about a time you perpetrated, were victimized by, or witnessed an act of injustice. Be sure to follow the requirements.         Due Now: "None of this is Fair," by Richard Rodriguez  
    Due Monday: "Superman and Me," by Sherman Alexie, in The Language of Composition. Says/Does/Because, please.  
    Due Monday, 10/6: Final Draft of Injustice Narrative. Staple your revised copy on top of your peer reviewed copy. Don't forget to re-underline your rhetorical strategies.
    Due Monday, 10/13: Optional revision of your Object essay. If you choose not to revise your essay, please return it to me to put into your file.    
    1. Hmmm ... I seem to have only one poster on my door
    2. Mr. Kline's mental checklist 
    3. An unfair discussion
    4. Diction TEP

    Thursday, October 2, 2014

    Ah, technology ...


    Hullo -

    Whitney sent me a screenshot of what her computer looked like when she set up her header in Pages, but the picture wouldn't post here.

    As best I could tell, she went to "Insert Page Numbers" and unclicked "Show Page Number on First Page."

    Agenda, October 2

    Due Friday, 10/3: Write a narrative about a time you perpetrated, were victimized by, or witnessed an act of injustice. Be sure to follow the requirements.         Due Now: "None of this is Fair," by Richard Rodriguez
    Due Monday: "Superman and Me," by Sherman Alexie, in The Language of Composition. Says/Does/Because, please.
    Due Monday, 10/13: Optional revision of your Object essay. If you choose not to revise your essay, please return it to me to put into your file.    
    1. Essay Questions (How should I write about my teachers?)
    2. Return of the Essays
    3. To the library for a moment 
    4. Short Sentences and Fragments
    5. TEP of diction in "Just Walk on By"
    6. An unfair discussion

    Wednesday, October 1, 2014

    Agenda, October 1

    Due Friday, 10/3: Write a narrative about a time you perpetrated, were victimized by, or witnessed an act of injustice. Be sure to follow the requirements.     Due Now: "Just Walk on By: Black Men and Public Space," by Brent Staples. Try a Says/Does.    
    Due Wednesday: Finish Says/Does/Because  
    Due Thursday: "None of this is Fair," by Richard Rodriguez 
    1. I have two posters on my door ...
    2. Essay Questions (Do you know how to punctuate dialogue?)
    3. Structural Analysis of "Just Walk on By"
    4. TEP of diction in "Just Walk on By"
    5. Short Sentences and Fragments (Finish Exercise 1)