Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Agenda, September 11

Due Friday: Write a letter to me convincing me that you're awesome. One-two pages. Typed. Double spaced. It should look like a letter, NOT an essay in MLA format.
Due Monday, 9/16: The Language of Composition, pages 1-38. Take notes in the Notes section of your spiral; kindly DO NOT write or put sticky notes in your textbook.

Due Thursday: Write Twain's definition of justice on an index card. Write neatly. (Index cards coming Wednesday).

Due Tomorrow: Know and be prepared to apply the SOAPS acronym
Do tonight: The Language of Composition, pages 13-21

  1. Confusing characters
  2. Winners and losers
  3. The big ideas

Monday, September 9, 2013

Agenda, September 10

Due Friday: Write a letter to me convincing me that you're awesome. One-two pages. Typed. Double spaced. It should look like a letter, NOT an essay in MLA format.
Due Monday, 9/16: The Language of Composition, pages 1-38. Take notes in the Notes section of your spiral; kindly DO NOT write or put sticky notes in your textbook.

Due Thursday: Write Twain's definition of justice on an index card. Write neatly. (Index cards coming Wednesday).
Do tonight: The Language of Composition, pages 7-13


  1. Just the facts, ma'am
  2. Confusing characters
  3. Winners and losers
  4. The big ideas

Sunday, September 8, 2013

Agenda, September 9

Due Now: Be prepared to argue both sides of the question "Do word changes alter Huckleberry Finn?"
Due Now: "How to Read ..." (handout). Practice your note-taking skills on one of the education handouts.
Due Friday: Write a letter to me convincing me that you're awesome. One-two pages. Typed. Double spaced. It should look like a letter, NOT an essay in MLA format.
Due Monday, 9/16: The Language of Composition, pages 1-38. Take notes in the Notes section of your spiral; kindly DO NOT write or put sticky notes in your textbook.
Do tonight: The Language of Composition, pages 1-7
  1. Why so many colloquialisms?
  2. Philosophical Chairs: Should we bowdlerize Huck Finn?
  3. Pap's Speech: Does Twain agree? How do you know?
  4. Let's tackle your questions.

Thursday, September 5, 2013

Agenda, September 6

Due Now: Visit the NY Times Room for Debate page about Huckleberry Finn. Pull one quote from each article that will allow you to answer the question posed: Do word changes alter Huckleberry Finn? Be prepared to argue both sides of the issue.
Due Monday: Read "How to Read ..." (handout). Practice your note-taking skills on one of the education handouts.

  1. Let's get quizzical!
  2. Philiosphical Chairs: Should we bowdlerize Huck Finn? 
  3. Satire: what is it and how do you recognize it?

Wednesday, September 4, 2013

Agenda, September 5

Due Yesterday: Find 5 colloquialisms (total) from your two chapters. Bring them to class with you.
Due Now: Visit the NY Times Room for Debate page about Huckleberry Finn. Pull one quote from each article that will allow you to answer the question posed: Do word changes alter Huckleberry Finn? Be prepared to argue both sides of the issue.

Coming Tomorrow: Matching Quiz on Rhetorical Devices

  1. Who's your "guy"?
  2. 205 Colloquialisms: What do they literally mean?
  3. 205 Colloquialisms: What do they stylistically mean?
  4. Philiosphical Chairs: Should we bowdlerize Huck Finn?

Tuesday, September 3, 2013

Agenda, September 4

Due Yesterday: Justice Essay, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, and your news e-mails
Due Now: Find 5 colloquialisms (total) from your two chapters. Bring them to class with you.
Due Tomorrow: Visit the NY Times Room for Debate page about Huckleberry Finn. Pull one quote from each article that will allow you to answer the question posed: Do word changes alter Huckleberry Finn? Be prepared to argue both sides of the issue.

Coming Friday: Matching Quiz on Rhetorical Devices
  1. Quickwrite: Tell me why you're awesome.
  2. Analyzing Kline's Rhetoric
  3. Huck Finn: Areas of confusion / interest
  4. 205 Colloquialisms: What do they literally mean?
  5. 205 Colloquialisms: What do they stylistically mean?

Agenda, September 3

Due Now: Justice Essay, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, and your news e-mails
Due Tomorrow: Find 5 colloquialisms (total) from your two chapters. Bring them to class with you.
Due THURSDAY: Visit the NY Times Room for Debate page about Huckleberry Finn. Pull one quote from each article that will allow you to answer the question posed: Do word changes alter Huckleberry Finn? Be prepared to argue both sides of the issue.
  1. Welcome! Now let's leave.
  2. AP Expecations, Drafts 1 and 3
  3. Matchmaker, matchmaker ...
  4. Analyzing Kline's Rhetoric
  5. Quickwrite: Tell me why you're awesome.
  6. Huck Finn: Areas of confusion / interest


Monday, September 2, 2013

Some last minute reminders

Greetings -

Thanks to all for your thoughtful news responses. I hope your news habit is thoroughly ingrained and difficult to break; it's easier to make arguments relevant to the world at large if you're familiar with what's going on in the world at large.

As you're packing your bags with your brand new binders, your unmangled spirals, and your fresh pens, be sure you have your Justice Essay (in MLA format, naturally), your copy of The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, and a matching-quiz level of control of our rhetorical terms. We'll need all three in class tomorrow.

I'm eager to meet y'all face to face, and I'm eager to begin work. It's the beginning of a great adventure.

Sunday, August 11, 2013

A few good models

Hello, all!

I've just finished responding to my first batch of weekly e-mails, and I must say I'm quite impressed! The overall quality of the responses has been excellent. I'm going to post a few of my favorites below so you'll have a better idea of what I'm looking for.

Before I begin with the models, I've only received e-mails from 27 students so far. When I left in June, over 35 kids were enrolled in AP Lang. Be a good friend, and make sure your friends have started sending me e-mails.

And now, on with the show!

Model #1:
When you read this one, you'll probably notice some errors in conventions. Ideally, you're proofreading your work before you send it; however, the overall depth of thought in this outweigh the grammatical errors (that said - I'm being rushed out of my coffee shop office, so I'm going to publish this post without proofreading. Shame on me). This response is thorough, well organized, easy to follow, and also reveals a great deal about the author. It's personal, which makes it interesting.

    Over the course of this week I have followed several stories that from the beginning sparked my interest which then caused me to learn about each of them by searching, studying and the discussing.
  •      According to the article "Ohio horror house in kidnap, rape case is demolished", the Castro case is finally solved. It all started with three girls ages 14, 16, and 20 who all accepted rides from this man. They went missing shortly after between 2002 - 2004, and weren't seen for several years. After years of being sexually and physically tortured Ariel Castro left a door unlocked which lead to a chance for escape. Castro pleaded and tried to persuade in court that he was not a violent monster as portrayed by everybody, but just a sick man with an addiction. But according to the article "Prosecutor: Kidnapped Ohio women kept diaries" Castro had a total of 937 actions of horrific actions including rape, murder and kidnapping and he was found guilty and sentenced a life in prison. He barely made it out of being executed if it weren't for Castro signing over his house to be destroyed.
  •      Just Yesterday four Amber Alerts were released yesterday and received by almost all newer cellphones in the Oregon and Washington area. Hannah and Ethan Anderson ages 16 and 8 went missing on August 3rd and are believed to have been abducted by James L. DiMaggio. Their mother was also found dead in DiMaggio's burned out home in southern California and also found the remains of what seemed to be from an 8 year old boy. DNA tests are going to taken to determine whether the remains belong to 8-year- old Ethan.
  •     Christopher W. Dillingham was arrested for killing his dog by attaching a bomb to it's neck and then set the bomb off. A officer actually woke up from the explosion whom lives near Dillingham. He was then sentenced to jail for a 500,000 bail.
  • Sources:
I used two sources over the course of this week.  
  • Katu News on television and on the computer
  • Las Angeles Times : Nation Now
Discussions with my mother over the stories I learned about over this week led to a lot debate over the world.
- Castro Case: My mother and I pondered over this tragic case and discussed overall how sick the man must be. My mother thinks he deserves to be put to death for what he did, and I do too. But then something started to arise in my head and made me look at the bigger picture. The three major victims (the three girls) all deserve the satisfaction of justice. And due to the sentence in prison for Castro - They shall receive just that. But if Castro were put to death, he wouldn't have anytime to look at his actions and realize that he is a disgusting man, while if he just remained imprisoned for the rest of his life he gets to sit and ponder over each and everyone of his mistakes and mentally rot because of it.
- Amber Alerts: My mother and I cant imagine the pain and suffarage of what Hannah Anderson and her family have and are going through right now. It persuades myself to think of this world as a completely dark place with no love and no sanity. But I have to rely on the truth, that there is love and there is hope and light for the ones who do love. We just have to stay strong and hold true to what we believe in.
-Dillingham case- This case just discuts my mother and I. We both feel that only an insane person would do something like that; Which is true. He does not deserve a 500,000 bale, I believe he deserves a life sentence. One who does not love but only knows of how to hurt things shall be given back to them what they give to others. Sickness and cruelty. But once again I have to say that forgiveness should be a part of this world. But does he deserve it? No, he does not, it is between him and God. That is both I and my Mother's conclusion.
 
Together as a whole this week I learned that despite all of the evil and darkness that surrounds us in the world, I shall not let it degrade me. I shall remain strong to what I believe in and hold true to my faith. I will keep looking towards the light which will eventually carry me home. And although I may want to ignore what goes on around me, it was a great eye opener and illustrated why we should be a light to others. 
 
Model #2:
This model has a different organizational strategy than the first one. I don't care what type of organization you employ, but be sure your responses are well organized.
 
The news story that has most caught my eye during the first half of the summer was the situation with Mr. Snowden (now this e-mail is probably going to be inspected by the NSA). I think it's great that somebody is willing to completely give up their career and ruin their life in order to tell the American people what they ought to know. Last I heard, Snowden was in stuck in Russia while trying to gain asylum in one of the Latin American countries that accepted him.
       Another story that I have been keeping up on is the Zimmerman trial. I feel very passionately that George Zimmerman did the right thing. After all, he was the neighborhood watch and it was his duty to make sure somebody suspicious isn't up to no good. It turns out that Trayvon actually had traces of marijuana in his system. I also believe that he completely acted in righteous and lawful self defense when he killed Trayvon. I understand that people believe that Mr. Zimmerman acted on racism when he chose to investigate Trayvon, but there really is no way to prove such a claim.
       I read other minor news stories as I browse through the BBC app on my phone (where I usually read news articles). For instance, a couple days ago I read that scientists have successfully grown and eaten a lab grown burger patty. It sounds pretty gross, but it could completely change the food industry.
       I don't always discuss the news with people, but when I do it's usually to tell my family about the interesting facts and snippets that I read. I have had a couple conversations with my dad about certain news articles, including the Snowden situation and the Zimmerman trial.  He has mostly all of the same opinions and views as me though, so it would be a good idea for me to find somebody with different views so I can have a more informative conversation and maybe even a debate on certain issues.
 
Model #3:
This isn't the entire response from a student, but it might be my favorite paragraph from my first 27 e-mails. Notice how the author explores both sides of an issue that seems, on the surface, the be non-controversial. 

In other news, scientists have discovered how to grow crops in the desert. Who knew the secret was as simple as adding seawater and solar power? Cucumbers and similar plants have been growing in one of the harshest environments on Earth; the Sahara desert. The seawater and extreme heat make a perfect match for creating lush plant life that is far from what you'd expect in the dry Sahara. I found this article on CNN.com, it is titled "Seawater and Solar Power Grow Crops in the Desert". After discussing this with my family, we have concluded that although this discovery has obvious pros, such as bringing hydrating plant life into a place previously cursed with dehydration, it also may come with some cons. Seawater is not naturally found near deserts, and messing with such an ecosystem seems a little risky. I'm afraid with what may come of this. Will humans turn all of the major deserts into forests? If so, where will those unique desert animals go? I think it's best we don't push the boundaries of Mother Nature.
 
Model #4:
I know I praised many of you for exploring a variety of issues (and I mean it: there's power in reading broadly), but this sentence really struck me. It's a deliberate approach that I haven't seen before:
 
For this first week, I wanted to focus on the US economy, specifically the debate regarding our (US government) spending and its effects. 
 
By no means were these the only excellent responses, but these should help guide those of you who are unsure about what to do.   

Saturday, July 6, 2013

Summer Homework, 2013


AP Language and Composition
Summer Homework, 2013

Welcome to Mr. Kline’s AP Language and Composition! I’m very excited about next year and I’m looking forward to meeting all of you. As with most AP classes, our work begins this summer. Many of these assignments require access to the Internet and to e-mail. If you do not have dependable e-mail access, feel free to use good ol’ fashioned snail mail. I love snail mail!

Kline’s Contact Info:

A note on e-mail etiquette: Remember that your audience is an English teacher. It is perfectly acceptable to be friendly and funny in your e-mails, but you should always use your best spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Thanks in advance.

Your assignments:

1.     Relax. Take June off. Don’t think about school again until after July 4th.

2.     Memorize the definitions of some fancy rhetorical strategies (attached). Expect a quiz within the first week of class.

3.     Read “How to Mark a Book” (attached).

4.     Craft an essay that provides your personal answer to the question “What is justice?” You may base your answer on your personal reading as well as events in the news and in your own life. You may consider other questions, such as who deserves justice? Who abdicates their right to justice? Who decides who deserves justice?

This paper is the foundation of this course, and will be revised several times over the year. Please word-process your paper, double-spaced, in a clear, easy to read 12-point font. This paper is due on the first day of class. Late work is not accepted in AP classes at OCHS.

5.     It is essential for good rhetoricians to be aware of the news of the day. Beginning on August 8th, I would like you to send me weekly e-mails tracking your engagement with the news media. I realize that many families take advantage of the summertime to travel, so consult with your family about your vacation schedule at the beginning of the summer. It is acceptable to begin this assignment early, but you may not end it late. I expect to receive four e-mails (in four different weeks) by the first day of school.

Your e-mails should include the following information:
    1. What news stories (notice that “stories” is plural) are you following? What new news stories have caught your eye this week?
    2. What sources are you using? Be specific here: give the name of the newspaper, website, blog, television, or radio programs you use to gather information. Feel free to consult multiple sources within a given week and to change sources from week to week. It will be informative to note different perspectives, voices, and approaches used by different media and different media outlets.
    3. Who have you talked with about the news of the week? What have you learned from your conversations?

6.     Read, or reread, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain. As you read, consider Twain’s novel in terms of the two main focuses of this course: the theme of justice and acts of argumentation. Take notes regarding examples of injustice and justice served. Use those notes to track Twain’s arguments about justice (answering – among other questions - who, according to Twain, merits justice? Who is denied justice? How is justice promoted and injustice punished?). Pay particular attention to tone, diction, and the use of satire (the definition of satire can be found online or in any reliable dictionary). I recommend annotating each chapter for easy reference later. Please check out a copy from the OCHS Library so we can all reference the same page numbers.


If you have any questions or difficulties, do not hesitate to contact me via e-mail. My job is to be your advisor, not your obstacle.

Happy Summer!



Kline


Handy reminder:
This document will be posted to my AP Lang blog:

If anything interesting happens over the summer, I’ll post it there.
Before the school year begins, be sure you understand the definition of all of the following terms. Many of the terms are defined on the website The Virtual Salt:


Flash cards are not required, but they make an excellent study aid.


Rhetorical Appeals


Ethos
One’s credibility as a speaker and writer.

Logos
The intellectual power of one’s speech or writing.


Pathos
The emotional power of one’s speech or writing.
Style: Artful expression of ideas: detail, diction, figures of speech (see below), imagery, syntax, tone



Figures of Speech

Figures of Speech: Tropes
Artful deviation from ordinary or principal signification of a word.

Figures of Speech: Schemes
Artful deviation from the ordinary arrangement of words.

Reference to one thing as another
  • Metaphor
  • Simile
  • Synecdoche
  • Metonymy
Word play/puns
  • Personification
  • Zeugma
  • Onomatopoeia
Overstatement/understatement
  • Hyperbole
  • Litotes
Semantic Inversions
  • Rhetorical question
  • Hypophora
  • Irony
  • Oxymoron
  • Paradox

Structures of balance
  • Parallelism
  • Antithesis
Omission
  • Ellipsis
  • Asyndeton
Repetition
  • Alliteration
  • Assonance
  • Anaphora
  • Epistrophe
  • Anadiplosis
  • Epanalepsis
  • Chiasmus
  • Polysyndeton


How to Mark a Book
By Mortimer J. Adler, Ph.D.
You know you have to read "between the lines" to get the most out of anything. I want to persuade you to do something equally important in the course of your reading. I want to persuade you to write between the lines. Unless you do, you are not likely to do the most efficient kind of reading.
I contend, quite bluntly, that marking up a book is not an act of mutilation but of love. You shouldn't mark up a book which isn't yours.

Librarians (or your friends) who lend you books expect you to keep them clean, and you should. If you decide that I am right about the usefulness of marking books, you will have to buy them. Most of the world's great books are available today, in reprint editions.

There are two ways in which one can own a book. The first is the property right you establish by paying for it, just as you pay for clothes and furniture. But this act of purchase is only the prelude to possession. Full ownership comes only when you have made it a part of yourself, and the best way to make yourself a part of it is by writing in it. An illustration may make the point clear. You buy a beefsteak and transfer it from the butcher's icebox to your own. But you do not own the beefsteak in the most important sense until you consume it and get it into your bloodstream. I am arguing that books, too, must be absorbed in your blood stream to do you any good.

Confusion about what it means to "own" a book leads people to a false reverence for paper, binding, and type -- a respect for the physical thing -- the craft of the printer rather than the genius of the author. They forget that it is possible for a man to acquire the idea, to possess the beauty, which a great book contains, without staking his claim by pasting his bookplate inside the cover. Having a fine library doesn't prove that its owner has a mind enriched by books; it proves nothing more than that he, his father, or his wife, was rich enough to buy them.

There are three kinds of book owners. The first has all the standard sets and best sellers -- unread, untouched. (This deluded individual owns woodpulp and ink, not books.) The second has a great many books -- a few of them read through, most of them dipped into, but all of them as clean and shiny as the day they were bought. (This person would probably like to make books his own, but is restrained by a false respect for their physical appearance.) The third has a few books or many -- every one of them dog-eared and dilapidated, shaken and loosened by continual use, marked and scribbled in from front to back. (This man owns books.)
Is it false respect, you may ask, to preserve intact and unblemished a beautifully printed book, an elegantly bound edition? Of course not. I'd no more scribble all over a first edition of 'Paradise Lost' than I'd give my baby a set of crayons and an original Rembrandt. I wouldn't mark up a painting or a statue. Its soul, so to speak, is inseparable from its body. And the beauty of a rare edition or of a richly manufactured volume is like that of a painting or a statue.

But the soul of a book "can" be separate from its body. A book is more like the score of a piece of music than it is like a painting. No great musician confuses a symphony with the printed sheets of music. Arturo Toscanini reveres Brahms, but Toscanini's score of the G minor Symphony is so thoroughly marked up that no one but the maestro himself can read it. The reason why a great conductor makes notations on his musical scores -- marks them up again and again each time he returns to study them--is the reason why you should mark your books. If your respect for magnificent binding or typography gets in the way, buy yourself a cheap edition and pay your respects to the author.

Why is marking up a book indispensable to reading? First, it keeps you awake. (And I don't mean merely conscious; I mean awake.) In the second place; reading, if it is active, is thinking, and thinking tends to express itself in words, spoken or written. The marked book is usually the thought-through book. Finally, writing helps you remember the thoughts you had, or the thoughts the author expressed. Let me develop these three points.

If reading is to accomplish anything more than passing time, it must be active. You can't let your eyes glide across the lines of a book and come up with an understanding of what you have read. Now an ordinary piece of light fiction, like, say, "Gone With the Wind," doesn't require the most active kind of reading. The books you read for pleasure can be read in a state of relaxation, and nothing is lost. But a great book, rich in ideas and beauty, a book that raises and tries to answer great fundamental questions, demands the most active reading of which you are capable. You don't absorb the ideas of John Dewey the way you absorb the crooning of Mr. Vallee. You have to reach for them. That you cannot do while you're asleep.

If, when you've finished reading a book, the pages are filled with your notes, you know that you read actively. The most famous "active" reader of great books I know is President Hutchins, of the University of Chicago. He also has the hardest schedule of business activities of any man I know. He invariably reads with a pencil, and sometimes, when he picks up a book and pencil in the evening, he finds himself, instead of making intelligent notes, drawing what he calls 'caviar factories' on the margins. When that happens, he puts the book down. He knows he's too tired to read, and he's just wasting time.

But, you may ask, why is writing necessary? Well, the physical act of writing, with your own hand, brings words and sentences more sharply before your mind and preserves them better in your memory. To set down your reaction to important words and sentences you have read, and the questions they have raised in your mind, is to preserve those reactions and sharpen those questions.

Even if you wrote on a scratch pad, and threw the paper away when you had finished writing, your grasp of the book would be surer. But you don't have to throw the paper away. The margins (top as bottom, and well as side), the end-papers, the very space between the lines, are all available. They aren't sacred. And, best of all, your marks and notes become an integral part of the book and stay there forever. You can pick up the book the following week or year, and there are all your points of agreement, disagreement, doubt, and inquiry. It's like resuming an interrupted conversation with the advantage of being able to pick up where you left off.

And that is exactly what reading a book should be: a conversation between you and the author. Presumably he knows more about the subject than you do; naturally, you'll have the proper humility as you approach him. But don't let anybody tell you that a reader is supposed to be solely on the receiving end. Understanding is a two-way operation; learning doesn't consist in being an empty receptacle. The learner has to question himself and question the teacher. He even has to argue with the teacher, once he understands what the teacher is saying. And marking a book is literally an expression of differences, or agreements of opinion, with the author.

There are all kinds of devices for marking a book intelligently and fruitfully. Here's the way I do it:
  • Underlining (or highlighting): of major points, of important or forceful statements.
  • Vertical lines at the margin: to emphasize a statement already underlined.
  • Star, asterisk, or other doo-dad at the margin: to be used sparingly, to emphasize the ten or twenty most important statements in the book. (You may want to fold the bottom comer of each page on which you use such marks. It won't hurt the sturdy paper on which most modern books are printed, and you will be able take the book off the shelf at any time and, by opening it at the folded-corner page, refresh your recollection of the book.)
  • Numbers in the margin: to indicate the sequence of points the author makes in developing a single argument.
  • Numbers of other pages in the margin: to indicate where else in the book the author made points relevant to the point marked; to tie up the ideas in a book, which, though they may be separated by many pages, belong together.
  • Circling or highlighting of key words or phrases.
  • Writing in the margin, or at the top or bottom of the page, for the sake of: recording questions (and perhaps answers) which a passage raised in your mind; reducing a complicated discussion to a simple statement; recording the sequence of major points right through the books. I use the end-papers at the back of the book to make a personal index of the author's points in the order of their appearance.
The front end-papers are to me the most important. Some people reserve them for a fancy bookplate. I reserve them for fancy thinking. After I have finished reading the book and making my personal index on the back end-papers, I turn to the front and try to outline the book, not page by page or point by point (I've already done that at the back), but as an integrated structure, with a basic unity and an order of parts. This outline is, to me, the measure of my understanding of the work.

If you're a die-hard anti-book-marker, you may object that the margins, the space between the lines, and the end-papers don't give you room enough. All right. How about using a scratch pad slightly smaller than the page-size of the book -- so that the edges of the sheets won't protrude? Make your index, outlines and even your notes on the pad, and then insert these sheets permanently inside the front and back covers of the book.

Or, you may say that this business of marking books is going to slow up your reading. It probably will. That's one of the reasons for doing it. Most of us have been taken in by the notion that speed of reading is a measure of our intelligence. There is no such thing as the right speed for intelligent reading. Some things should be read quickly and effortlessly and some should be read slowly and even laboriously. The sign of intelligence in reading is the ability to read different things differently according to their worth. In the case of good books, the point is not to see how many of them you can get through, but rather how many can get through you -- how many you can make your own. A few friends are better than a thousand acquaintances. If this be your aim, as it should be, you will not be impatient if it takes more time and effort to read a great book than it does a newspaper.

You may have one final objection to marking books. You can't lend them to your friends because nobody else can read them without being distracted by your notes. Furthermore, you won't want to lend them because a marked copy is kind of an intellectual diary, and lending it is almost like giving your mind away.

If your friend wishes to read your Plutarch's Lives, Shakespeare, or The Federalist Papers, tell him gently but firmly, to buy a copy. You will lend him your car or your coat -- but your books are as much a part of you as your head or your heart.