Monday, September 30, 2013

Agenda, September 30

Due Now: "The Allegory of the Cave," by Plato (handout - don't leave class without one). Write all over your handout.
Due Tomorrow: Grammar as Rhetoric and Style: Appositives (page 269). Read it. Take notes. Read (but do not do) Exercises 1-3. Come prepared with questions.
Due Wednesday: "Me Talk Pretty One Day," by David Sedaris, in The Language of Composition
Due Friday: Vocab #2.
Due Friday: Education Narrative. Note the change in the assignment requirements.

  1. Do you know Emerson's definition of the learning process?
  2. Education Narrative Questions
  3. It's probably time to break out those awesome letters ...
  4. Playing with Plato

Friday, September 27, 2013

Vocab To Deux


I’ll Be the Judge of That:
Words about Evidence, Proof, and Judgment
Due Friday, October 4

Provide the definition for each of the following words that you don’t know. Even if you think you are familiar with the word, you should check its definition to confirm your understanding. For words you need to define, include the dictionary definition and a translation of the dictionary definition into your own words.

Write an original sentence for each word in the list, whether you need to define it or not. Post one sentence as a comment. Please type your work.

1.     biased
2.     exculpate
3.     impartial
4.     incontrovertible
5.     integrity
6.     objectivity
7.     subjectivity
8.     penitent
9.     plausible
10.  substantiated
11.  vindicated

Thursday, September 26, 2013

Agenda, September 27

Due Now: "Education" by Ralph Waldo Emerson, in The Language of Composition
Due Now: Editorial Analysis #1: Find an editorial (not a news story). Write a one paragraph summary, which includes the source information ("Title," Source, Author) and the author's purpose. Below the summary, restate the author's position and list three reasons in support of that position. Label each of the three reasons as ethos, pathos, or logos. Then state the opposite of the author's position and three counterarguments. Label each of these arguments as ethos, pathos, or logos. Typed. Include a copy of the article or a link to the article.

Due Monday: "The Allegory of the Cave," by Plato (handout - don't leave class without one). Write all over your handout.


  1. Editorial Review
  2. Education Narrative BS
  3. Structure in Emerson, whole class
  4. Open Disco
  5. Emerson's two main points Redux
  6. It's a two-fer: Is this justice? AND good storytelling.

Agenda, September 26

Due Now: "Education" by Ralph Waldo Emerson, in The Language of Composition
Due Friday: Editorial Analysis #1: Find an editorial (not a news story). Write a one paragraph summary, which includes the source information ("Title," Source, Author) and the author's purpose. Below the summary, restate the author's position and list three reasons in support of that position. Label each of the three reasons as ethos, pathos, or logos. Then state the opposite of the author's position and three counterarguments. Label each of these arguments as ethos, pathos, or logos. Typed. Include a copy of the article or a link to the article.

Due Friday: "The Allegory of the Cave," by Plato (handout - don't leave class without one). Write all over your handout.

  1. We had a "guy" meltdown yesterday
  2. Fashion advice from Mr. Kline (?!?)
  3. What do you know about storytelling?
  4. Education Narrative Assignment
  5. Emerson's two main points
  6. Structure in Emerson
  7. Emerson's two main points Redux
  8. Open Disco
  9. Is this justice?

Education Narrative Assignment


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Education Narrative
Due Friday, October 4

Write a three – five page narrative about a time when you struggled to master something difficult. This learning may be small or significant, in school or out. You may have learned an idea or a skill. It’s not important whether you were successful in your learning; your essay is about the process, not the result.

Typed. Double Spaced. Twelve point. No blank lines between paragraphs, except to indicate a major shift in tone or setting. Three – five pages. Don’t forget a title.

Required: One intentionally, effectively placed appositive. Underlined.

Required: A header with your name and the page of the essay in the upper right hand corner.

Suggested: Three possible structures. 1) Begin at the end, then explain how you got there. 2) Alternate narration of the action with reflection on the action. 3) Traditional beginning, middle, end narration.

Audience: 1) An educated reader. 2) Yourself.

Purpose: 1) To explore the nature and process of acquiring knowledge 2) To explore your role in learning. 3) To identify effective or ineffective strategies for learning. 4) To tell a good story.

Excellent topics are not limited to major epiphanies. Sometimes great wisdom lies in exploring the little details. Write about an experience you remember vividly and can describe honestly, even if you weren’t successful in your endeavors.


Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Agenda, September 25

Due Now: "Education" by Ralph Waldo Emerson, in The Language of Composition
Due Friday: Editorial Analysis #1: Find an editorial (not a news story). Write a one paragraph summary, which includes the source information ("Title," Source, Author) and the author's purpose. Below the summary, restate the author's position and list three reasons in support of that position. Label each of the three reasons as ethos, pathos, or logos. Then state the opposite of the author's position and three counterarguments. Label each of these arguments as ethos, pathos, or logos. Typed. Include a copy of the article or a link to the article.

Due Friday: "The Allegory of the Cave," by Plato (handout - don't leave class without one)
  1. A Super Answer: In the comments, feel free to post your thoughts about the effect of Alexie switching to 3rd person in "Superman and Me."
  2. Emerson: Before we can even begin to talk, I need to figure out ...
  3. Emerson's two main points
  4. Structure in Emerson
  5. Is this justice?

Agenda, September 24

Due Now: "Superman and Me," by Sherman Alexie, in The Language of Composition.
Due Now: "Education" by Ralph Waldo Emerson, in The Language of Composition
Due Now: TEP paragraph on diction in "Caged Bird" OR "Superman." Typed. Double spaced.

Due Friday: Editorial Analysis #1: Find an editorial (not a news story). Write a one paragraph summary, which includes the source information ("Title," Source, Author) and the author's purpose. Below the summary, restate the author's position and list three reasons in support of that position. Label each of the three reasons as ethos, pathos, or logos. Then state the opposite of the author's position and three counterarguments. Label each of these arguments as ethos, pathos, or logos. Typed. Include a copy of the article or a link to the article.


  1. Lame Example of Editorial Analysis Assignment
  2. A Super Conversation: Audience and Purpose
  3. An Even Superer Conversation: Analogy, Point of View, Repetition
  4. Emerson: Before we can even begin to talk, I need to figure out
  5. Emerson's two main points
  6. Structure in Emerson
  7. Is this justice?

Monday, September 23, 2013

Agenda, September 23

Due Now: "Superman and Me," by Sherman Alexie, in The Language of Composition.
Due Now: Two column notes on "Superman and Me" with at least four entries: in the left column, copy a quotation from the text, including page number; in the right column, respond to the quotation (agree or disagree with it, admire or critique it, identify the strategy and analyze it)
Due Tuesday: "Education" by Ralph Waldo Emerson, in The Language of Composition
Due Tuesday: TEP paragraph on diction in "Caged Bird" OR "Superman." Typed. Double spaced.

Due Friday: Editorial Analysis #1: Find an editorial (not a news story). Write a one paragraph summary, which includes the source information ("Title," Source, Author) and the author's purpose. Below the summary, restate the author's position and list three reasons in support of that position. Label each of the three reasons as ethos, pathos, or logos. Then state the opposite of the author's position and three counterarguments. Label each of these arguments as ethos, pathos, or logos. Typed. Include a copy of the article or a link to the article.
  1. What I learned at the bouldering gym ...
  2. Editorial Analysis Assignment
  3. Share your notes
  4. A Super Conversation
  5. Is this justice?

Thursday, September 19, 2013

Agenda, September 20

Due Now: "Superman and Me," by Sherman Alexie, in The Language of Composition.
Due Now: Vocab 1

Due Monday: Two column notes on "Superman and Me" with at least four entries: in the left column, copy a quotation from the text, including page number; in the right column, respond to the quotation (agree or disagree with it, admire or critique it, identify the strategy and analyze it)
Due Tuesday: "Education" by Ralph Waldo Emerson, in The Language of Composition

Due Tuesday: TEP paragraph on diction in "Caged Bird" OR "Superman." Typed. Double spaced.
  1. Vocab Review
  2. What's a TEP?
  3. A Super Conversation
  4. Is this justice?

Meet the TEP Paragraph

Technique – Effect – Purpose Paragraph

1. In “Title of Essay,” [author] uses [rhetorical strategy] to [achieve his purpose – do not use the word purpose in your paragraph; in your topic sentence, you should directly state what the author hopes to achieve.]

2. Establish the context of the first quotation.

3. Quote the text. Never use a quotation as its own sentence. When writing about diction, you might want to quote a “series” of “Words” or “phrases” instead of a complete sentence. Follow the quotation with the author’s name and the page number in parentheses (Kline 22). Artful writers might combine steps two and three in a single sentence. If you are not confident in your ability to properly format a quotation, visit this link for some excellent advice: http://www.virtualsalt.com/quotehlp.htm

4. Analyze the quotation. How does this help you prove the author’s technique achieves her purpose? Focus on the effect on the reader. No MORE than two sentences of analysis.

5. Repeat steps two through four with a second example.

6. Close your paragraph.

Agenda, September 19

Due Yesterday: "I Know Why the Caged Bird Cannot Read," by Francine Prose.
Due Now: "Superman and Me," by Sherman Alexie, in The Language of Composition.
Due Tomorrow: Vocab 1

Due Monday: "Education" by Ralph Waldo Emerson, in The Language of Composition


  1. Timed Write Review
  2. Heads up, seven up (sort of)
  3. Prosaic Open Discussion (feel free to explain this pun in the comments)
  4. Prosaic Organized Discussion
  5. A Super Conversation

Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Agenda, September 18

Due Yesterday: "I Know Why the Caged Bird Cannot Read," by Francine Prose.
Due Thursday: "Superman and Me," by Sherman Alexie, in The Language of Composition.
Due Friday: Vocab 1

Timed Write Make-ups: Today, 2 pm, B105  

  1. What does synthesis mean?
  2. Prosaic Open Discussion (feel free to explain this pun in the comments)
  3. Prosaic Organized Discussion

Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Agenda, September 17

Due Monday, 9/16: The Language of Composition, pages 1-38.
Due Monday: Know and be prepared to apply the SOAPS acronym.
Due Tuesday: "I Know Why the Caged Bird Cannot Read," by Francine Prose. Take notes in the Notes section of your spiral; kindly DO NOT write or put sticky notes in your textbook.

Due Thursday: "Superman and Me," by Sherman Alexie, in The Language of Composition. Take notes in the Notes section of your spiral; kindly DO NOT write or put sticky notes in your textbook.
Due Friday: Vocab 1

Timed Write Make-ups: Wednesday, 2 pm, B105  

  1. Four SOAPS
  2. What does synthesis mean?
  3. Prosaic Open Discussion (feel free to explain this pun in the comments)
  4. Prosaic Organized Discussion

Monday, September 16, 2013

Vocab 1


Due Friday, September 20
You Talkin’ to Me?
Words About Language and Argument

Provide the definition for each of the following words that you don’t know. Even if you think you are familiar with the word, you should check its definition to confirm your understanding. For words you need to define, include the dictionary definition and a translation of the dictionary definition into your own words.

Write an original sentence for each word in the list, whether you need to define it or not. Post one sentence as a comment. Please type your work.

1.     assertion
2.     clarity
3.     cogent
4.     coherent
5.     cohesive
6.     didactic
7.     discourse
8.     eloquence
9.     emphasize
10.  fluid
11.  implication
12.  lucid
13.  rhetoric

Agenda, September 16

Due Monday, 9/16: The Language of Composition, pages 1-38.
Due Monday: Know and be prepared to apply the SOAPS acronym.
Due Tuesday: "I Know Why the Caged Bird Cannot Read," by Francine Prose. Take notes in the Notes section of your spiral; kindly DO NOT write or put sticky notes in your textbook.

Due Friday: Vocab 1
  1. A Note about Notes (and points)
  2. General Questions about 1-38
  3. Whole class practice SOAPS, pg 7
  4. Quick refresher: logos, pathos, ethos
  5. Two activities: 23 and 29
  6. Four SOAPS
  7. What does synthesis mean?

Friday, September 13, 2013

Agenda, September 13

Due Now: Write a letter to me convincing me that you're awesome. One-two pages. Typed. Double spaced. It should look like a letter, NOT an essay in MLA format.
Due Monday, 9/16: The Language of Composition, pages 1-38.
Due Monday: Know and be prepared to apply the SOAPS acronym
.
Due Tuesday: "I Know Why the Caged Bird Cannot Read," by Francine Prose. Take notes in the Notes section of your spiral; kindly DO NOT write or put sticky notes in your textbook. 
  1. Timed Write
  2. Sentences I like
  3. The return of the papers

Thursday, September 12, 2013

Agenda, September 12

Due Now: Write Twain's definition of justice on an index card. Write neatly. (Index cards coming Wednesday). 

Due Tomorrow: Write a letter to me convincing me that you're awesome. One-two pages. Typed. Double spaced. It should look like a letter, NOT an essay in MLA format.
Due Monday, 9/16: The Language of Composition, pages 1-38. Take notes in the Notes section of your spiral; kindly DO NOT write or put sticky notes in your textbook.
We'll be discussing the "culminating activity" in class on Monday.
Due Now: Know and be prepared to apply the SOAPS acronym
Do tonight: Prepare for Huck Finn timed write.


  1. Winners and losers
  2. The big ideas
  3. Sentences I like (if time allows)
  4. Sentences to fix

Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Agenda, September 11

Due Friday: Write a letter to me convincing me that you're awesome. One-two pages. Typed. Double spaced. It should look like a letter, NOT an essay in MLA format.
Due Monday, 9/16: The Language of Composition, pages 1-38. Take notes in the Notes section of your spiral; kindly DO NOT write or put sticky notes in your textbook.

Due Thursday: Write Twain's definition of justice on an index card. Write neatly. (Index cards coming Wednesday).

Due Tomorrow: Know and be prepared to apply the SOAPS acronym
Do tonight: The Language of Composition, pages 13-21

  1. Confusing characters
  2. Winners and losers
  3. The big ideas

Monday, September 9, 2013

Agenda, September 10

Due Friday: Write a letter to me convincing me that you're awesome. One-two pages. Typed. Double spaced. It should look like a letter, NOT an essay in MLA format.
Due Monday, 9/16: The Language of Composition, pages 1-38. Take notes in the Notes section of your spiral; kindly DO NOT write or put sticky notes in your textbook.

Due Thursday: Write Twain's definition of justice on an index card. Write neatly. (Index cards coming Wednesday).
Do tonight: The Language of Composition, pages 7-13


  1. Just the facts, ma'am
  2. Confusing characters
  3. Winners and losers
  4. The big ideas

Sunday, September 8, 2013

Agenda, September 9

Due Now: Be prepared to argue both sides of the question "Do word changes alter Huckleberry Finn?"
Due Now: "How to Read ..." (handout). Practice your note-taking skills on one of the education handouts.
Due Friday: Write a letter to me convincing me that you're awesome. One-two pages. Typed. Double spaced. It should look like a letter, NOT an essay in MLA format.
Due Monday, 9/16: The Language of Composition, pages 1-38. Take notes in the Notes section of your spiral; kindly DO NOT write or put sticky notes in your textbook.
Do tonight: The Language of Composition, pages 1-7
  1. Why so many colloquialisms?
  2. Philosophical Chairs: Should we bowdlerize Huck Finn?
  3. Pap's Speech: Does Twain agree? How do you know?
  4. Let's tackle your questions.

Thursday, September 5, 2013

Agenda, September 6

Due Now: Visit the NY Times Room for Debate page about Huckleberry Finn. Pull one quote from each article that will allow you to answer the question posed: Do word changes alter Huckleberry Finn? Be prepared to argue both sides of the issue.
Due Monday: Read "How to Read ..." (handout). Practice your note-taking skills on one of the education handouts.

  1. Let's get quizzical!
  2. Philiosphical Chairs: Should we bowdlerize Huck Finn
  3. Satire: what is it and how do you recognize it?

Wednesday, September 4, 2013

Agenda, September 5

Due Yesterday: Find 5 colloquialisms (total) from your two chapters. Bring them to class with you.
Due Now: Visit the NY Times Room for Debate page about Huckleberry Finn. Pull one quote from each article that will allow you to answer the question posed: Do word changes alter Huckleberry Finn? Be prepared to argue both sides of the issue.

Coming Tomorrow: Matching Quiz on Rhetorical Devices

  1. Who's your "guy"?
  2. 205 Colloquialisms: What do they literally mean?
  3. 205 Colloquialisms: What do they stylistically mean?
  4. Philiosphical Chairs: Should we bowdlerize Huck Finn?

Tuesday, September 3, 2013

Agenda, September 4

Due Yesterday: Justice Essay, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, and your news e-mails
Due Now: Find 5 colloquialisms (total) from your two chapters. Bring them to class with you.
Due Tomorrow: Visit the NY Times Room for Debate page about Huckleberry Finn. Pull one quote from each article that will allow you to answer the question posed: Do word changes alter Huckleberry Finn? Be prepared to argue both sides of the issue.

Coming Friday: Matching Quiz on Rhetorical Devices
  1. Quickwrite: Tell me why you're awesome.
  2. Analyzing Kline's Rhetoric
  3. Huck Finn: Areas of confusion / interest
  4. 205 Colloquialisms: What do they literally mean?
  5. 205 Colloquialisms: What do they stylistically mean?

Agenda, September 3

Due Now: Justice Essay, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, and your news e-mails
Due Tomorrow: Find 5 colloquialisms (total) from your two chapters. Bring them to class with you.
Due THURSDAY: Visit the NY Times Room for Debate page about Huckleberry Finn. Pull one quote from each article that will allow you to answer the question posed: Do word changes alter Huckleberry Finn? Be prepared to argue both sides of the issue.
  1. Welcome! Now let's leave.
  2. AP Expecations, Drafts 1 and 3
  3. Matchmaker, matchmaker ...
  4. Analyzing Kline's Rhetoric
  5. Quickwrite: Tell me why you're awesome.
  6. Huck Finn: Areas of confusion / interest


Monday, September 2, 2013

Some last minute reminders

Greetings -

Thanks to all for your thoughtful news responses. I hope your news habit is thoroughly ingrained and difficult to break; it's easier to make arguments relevant to the world at large if you're familiar with what's going on in the world at large.

As you're packing your bags with your brand new binders, your unmangled spirals, and your fresh pens, be sure you have your Justice Essay (in MLA format, naturally), your copy of The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, and a matching-quiz level of control of our rhetorical terms. We'll need all three in class tomorrow.

I'm eager to meet y'all face to face, and I'm eager to begin work. It's the beginning of a great adventure.