Thursday, January 31, 2013

Agenda, February 1



Due Now: Process Analysis Packet. Take good notes!
Due Monday: Common Place 5
Due Monday: Cause and Effect Packet. Add it to your Bib (along with the other packets)
Due Tuesday: Outline for Process Analysis Essay: NO introduction - just a claim or thesis, body with topic sentences only, followed with two details, full conclusion that does not restate your main ideas. Typed. Single spaced ok. NO 5 paragraph essays.
Coming Next Week: State Writing Assessment for juniors; Time Write practice for seniors.
  1. Process Analysis Brainstorm
  2. Argument o' the Week (in two parts!)
  3. Barry or Wolf? 

Agenda, January 31

Due Now: Outline for C&C Essay: Multi-paragraph introduction, body with topic sentences only, followed with two details, one-sentence "So What?" for the conclusion. Typed. Single spaced ok. NO 5 paragraph essays.
Due Now: Process Analysis Packet. Take good notes!
Due Monday: Common Place 5
Due Monday: Cause and Effect Packet. Add it to your Bib (along with the other packets)
Coming Next Week: State Writing Assessment for juniors; Time Write practice for seniors.
  1. "The Runner" - Organization 
  2. Process Analysis Brainstorm
  3. "Playing House" Do's and Don't's
  4. Pick a Compare and Contrast essay 

Wednesday, January 30, 2013

Agenda, January 30

Due Now: Compare and Contrast Packet. Take good notes!
Due Thursday: Outline for C&C Essay: Multi-paragraph introduction, body with topic sentences only, followed with two details, one-sentence "So What?" for the conclusion. Typed. Single spaced ok. NO 5 paragraph essays.
Due Thursday: Process Analysis Packet. Take good notes!
Due Next Monday: Common Place 5 
  1. C&C Brainstorming
  2. "Playing House"
  3. Pick an essay

Tuesday, January 29, 2013

Agenda, January 29

Due Now: Compare and Contrast Packet. Take good notes!
Due Now: Multiple Choice Practice. Note how far you get in 15 minutes, then finish. After 15 minutes, feel free to use resources to check / correct your answers.
Due Thursday: Outline for C&C Essay: Multi-paragraph introduction, body with topic sentences only, followed with two details, one-sentence "So What?" for the conclusion. Typed. Single spaced ok. NO 5 paragraph essays.
Due Thursday: Process Analysis Packet. Take good notes!
Due Next Monday: Common Place 5 
  1. C&C Brainstorming
  2. Multiple Choice Answers
  3. "Playing House"

Monday, January 28, 2013

Agenda, January 28

Due Now: Vocab? High Five! You know the drill.
Due Now: Compare and Contrast Packet. Take good notes!
Due Tomorrow: Multiple Choice Practice. Note how far you get in 15 minutes, then finish. After 15 minutes, feel free to use resources to check / correct your answers.
Due Wednesday: Outline for C&C Essay: Multi-paragraph introduction, body with topic sentences only, followed with two details, one-sentence "So What?" for the conclusion. Typed. Single spaced ok. NO 5 paragraph essays.
Due Next Monday: Common Place 5 
  1. Vocab 5 in groups
  2. Obama's techniques to purpose
  3. C&C Notes
  4. C&C Brainstorming
  5. "Playing House"

Thursday, January 24, 2013

Agenda, January 24

Due Thursday: Poor, poor synthesis 
Due Monday: Vocab? High Five! You know the drill.
Due Monday: Compare and Contrast Packet. Take good notes!
Due Wednesday: Outline for C&C Essay: Multi-paragraph introduction, body with topic sentences only, followed with two details, one-sentence "So What?" for the conclusion. Typed. Single spaced ok. NO 5 paragraph essays.
  1. Synth Answers
  2. Model D&C Outlines
  3. Group sharing from yesterday
  4. Obama's Inauguration
  5. Argument o' the Week

Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Agenda, January 23

Due Now: D&C Packet
Due Now: Outline for D&C Essay: Complete introduction, body with topic sentences only, followed with two details, One-sentence "So What?" for the conclusion. Typed. Single spaced ok. NO 5 paragraph essays.
Due Thursday: Poor, poor synthesis 
Due Monday: Vocab? High Five! You know the drill.
Due Monday: Compare and Contrast Packet. Take good notes!   
  1. Synth Questions 
  2. Mr. Kline Fights Evil
  3. Essays in groups

Vocab? High Five!

Due Monday, January 28

Provide the definition of the following words. Include the dictionary definition and a translation of the dictionary definition into your own words. Write an original sentence for each. Post one sentence as a comment. Please type your work.
  1. condescending
  2. contemptuous
  3. despotic
  4. dictatorial
  5. disdain
  6. haughty
  7. imperious
  8. patronizing

Agenda, January 22

Due Now: Vocab? Fore! You know the drill.
Due Now: D&C Packet
Due Tomorrow: Outline for D&C Essay: Complete introduction, body with topic sentences only, followed with two details, One-sentence "So What?" for the conclusion. Typed. Single spaced ok. NO 5 paragraph essays.
Due Thursday: Poor, poor synthesis 
  1. Synth Questions? Don't dawdle on this: you have assignments due on Tuesday and Wednesday, plus reading.
  2. 3 D&C Essays: What are the divisions? What are the classifications?
  3. Stormy Brains
  4. Rhet Dev Quiz: Why is it right?
  5. "Always, Always, Always"

Friday, January 18, 2013

REVISED: General Format for a Song


General Format for a song:
Artist (Last name first). “Song Title.” CD/Album Title. Record Label. Year. Type of Media.

A Christmas Carol. Tom Lehrer. Songs & More Songs by Tom Lehrer. Rhino Records. 1967. mp3.
Silent Night / 7 O’Clock News. Simon and Garfunkel. Parsley, Sage, Rosemary, and Thyme. Columbia Records. 1966. mp3.

Bibliographical Info for our Rhetorical Mode Packets


All of the essays in our rhetorical mode packets are from the following anthology:

Short Takes: Model Essays for Composition
Ed. Elizabeth Penfield
New York: Pearson Longman, 2007

Agenda, January 18

Due Now: Highlight "Division and Classification" notes; read "Always, Always, Always"
Due Now: Common Place 4
Due Tuesday: Vocab? Fore! You know the drill.
Due Tuesday: Finish D&C Packet
Due Wednesday: Outline for D&C Essay: Complete introduction, body with topic sentences only, followed with two details, One-sentence "So What?" for the conclusion. Typed. Single spaced ok. NO 5 paragraph essays.
Due Thursday: Poor, poor synthesis 
  1. Synth Questions? Don't dawdle on this: you have assignments due on Tuesday and Wednesday, plus reading.
  2. Argument o' the Week
  3. Rhet Dev Quiz: Why is it right?
  4. D&C Brainstorming
  5. "Always, Always, Always"

Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Agenda, January 17

Due Now: "A Modest Proposal," by Jonathan Swift, in 50 Essays. Add it to your Bib.
Due Tomorrow: Highlight "Division and Classification" notes; read "Always, Always, Always"
Due Tomorrow: Common Place 4
Due Tuesday, January 22: Vocab? Fore! You know the drill.
  1. Synth Questions? Don't dawdle on this: you will have an assignment on Tuesday that will be due on Wednesday.
  2. Rhet Dev Quiz: Why is it right?
  3. I think Swift's purpose is ...
  4. What's Swift's persona? How do we feel about him?
  5. Swift's logos: from effect to purpose
  6. Open field, if time allows

Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Agenda, January 16

Due Now: "A Modest Proposal," by Jonathan Swift, in 50 Essays. Add it to your Bib.
Due Now: Write a paragraph that synthesizes Nickel and Dimed with another source. Typed. MLA format.
Due Friday: Common Place 4

Due Tuesday, January 22: Vocab? Fore! You know the drill.
  1. Synth Questions?
  2. What's Swift's persona?
  3. Swift's logos: from effect to purpose
  4. Open field, if time allows

Agenda, January 15

Due Now: "A Modest Proposal," by Jonathan Swift, in 50 Essays. Add it to your Bib.
Due Tomorrow: Write a paragraph that synthesizes Nickel and Dimed with another source. Typed. MLA format.
Due Friday: Common Place 4

Due Tuesday, January 22: Vocab? Fore! You know the drill.
  1. Synth Questions?
  2. Rhetorical Devices Quiz, Part 2
  3. A "Modest" Discussion

Sunday, January 13, 2013

Vocab? Fore!

Due Tuesday, January 22

Provide the definition of the following words. Include the dictionary definition and a translation of the dictionary definition into your own words. Write an original sentence for each. Post one sentence as a comment. You only need to post one sentence the week, not one for each list.


When the Going Gets Tough
Words to Describe a Struggle
  1. convoluted
  2. cryptic
  3. futile
  4. impede
  5. obscure
  6. quandary


I’m a Loser, Baby
Words to Describe the Lazy
  1. indolent
  2. insipid
  3. listless
  4. torpor


Agenda, January 14

Due Now: Vocab Tree 
Due Now: "A Modest Proposal," by Jonathan Swift, in 50 Essays. Add it to your Bib.
Due Wednesday: Write a paragraph that synthesizes Nickel and Dimed with another source. Typed. MLA format.
Due Friday (We do have school on Friday, don't we?): Common Place 4
Due Tuesday, January 22: Vocab? Fore! You know the drill.
  1. Let's get quizzical!
  2. Synth Questions?
  3. 5 Swift Minutes
  4. The people have spoken: one more day on Ehrenreich

Thursday, January 10, 2013

Agenda, January 11

Due Now: Common Place 3

Due Monday, January 14: Vocab Tree. Feel free to put your personality into your sentences. Clever posts have begun! Don't forget to add yours!
Due Monday: "A Modest Proposal," by Jonathan Swift, in 50 Essays. Add it to your Bib.
Due Wednesday: Write a paragraph that synthesizes Nickel and Dimed with another source. Typed. MLA format.
  1. Synth Questions?
  2. Argument o' the Week
  3. Humor Wrap Up
  4. Connections in Ehrenreich
  5. "Evaluation": what's her purpose?

Wednesday, January 9, 2013

Agenda, January 10


Due Now: A list of words (and definitions) you looked up while reading Nickel and Dimed. Typed. You can turn this in Wednesday if it's easy.
Due Now: TEP Paragraph about diction OR tone in Nickel and Dimed. Typed in MLA format.
Due Friday: Common Place 3
Due Monday, January 14: Vocab Tree. Feel free to put your personality into your sentences. Clever posts have begun! Don't forget to add yours!

Due Monday: "A Modest Proposal," by Jonathan Swift, in 50 Essays. Add it to your Bib.
  1. Coming tomorrow: connections between Ehrenreich and our other social class texts
  2. Susie's question
  3. The Poor Synthesis Prompt
  4. Asyndeton and Polysyndeton
  5. Antithesis and Chiasmus
  6. Humor in Ehrenreich
  7. Who is she confronting?

Poor, Poor Synthesis

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Poor Synthesis Essay
Due Thursday, January 24th
This, I believe, is Winter Formal week. Plan accordingly.

Question: What, if anything, is society’s obligation to the poor? Using several of the pieces we have read in this unit, as well as your own personal experiences, reading, and research, explain how and why society at large ought (or ought not) to help those who can’t help themselves. Support your thesis with direct quotations from multiple texts (a minimum of three sources from class, plus one additional source from the Gale Databases), properly formatted in MLA style.

This paper will require you to define some key terms: society, obligation, and poor. We’ve read a number of models of authors using a variety of techniques to define complex terms. Quoting the dictionary is rarely necessary or effective. If you do quote the dictionary, you don’t need to cite it.

Typed. Double Spaced. Twelve point. No blank lines between paragraphs, except to indicate a major shift in tone or setting. Four – six pages. Don’t forget a title.

Required:

  • Three rhetorical strategies from The Virtual Salt, underlined and labeled (handwritten labels are acceptable, as are footnotes).
  • A minimum of three sources from class.
  • A minimum of one additional source from Gale.
  • A minimum of two synthesis paragraphs.
  • Properly formatted Works Cited Page.

Suggested: Consider the tone you want to set from the outset. Narrative openings emphasize pathos. Openings filled with stats and facts emphasize logos. What is the most effective tone for you to employ?

Audience: 1) “Society.”  2) Yourself.

Purpose: 1) To suggest a plan of action for the future. 2) To convince “society” to embrace your plan.

How to approach this paper:
·      Define your key terms.
·      Develop an opinion on this subject.
·      Gather evidence (from our texts and from research) to support your opinion. This is an argument; therefore, personal experience is valid evidence and first person is an acceptable POV.
·      Consider counter arguments.
·      Craft an outline.
·      Create clear, defensible topic sentences.
·      Draft paragraphs with two quotations to support your topic sentences.
·      Draft paragraphs with an eye towards ethos, pathos, and logos.
·      Proofread to ensure your quotations are properly formatted and cited. For this essay, “you will need to include the author’s name in your parenthetical citation” (Kline 1).
·      Create your Works Cited page.

Tuesday, January 8, 2013

Agenda, January 9

Due Tomorrow: A list of words (and definitions) you looked up while reading Nickel and Dimed. Typed. You can turn this in Wednesday if it's easy.
Due Tomorrow: TEP Paragraph about diction OR tone in Nickel and Dimed. Typed in MLA format.
Due Friday: Common Place 3
Due Monday, January 14: Vocab Tree. Feel free to put your personality into your sentences.

  1. Some Common Place Practice
  2. Synecdoche and Metonymy 
  3. While I was reading, I noticed ...
  4. Open discussion on "Serving in Florida" 
  5. Barabara Ehrenreich and Work

Monday, January 7, 2013

Agenda, January 8

Due Thursday: A list of words (and definitions) you looked up while reading Nickel and Dimed. Typed. You can turn this in Wednesday if it's easy.
Due Thursday: TEP Paragraph about diction OR tone in Nickel and Dimed. Typed in MLA format.
Due Friday: Common Place 3
Due Monday, January 14: Vocab Tree. Feel free to put your personality into your sentences.
  1. What to do with your Bibliography
  2. Some Common Place Practice
  3. Anadiplosis and Epanalepsis
  4. Anaphora and Epistrophe
  5. Barabara Ehrenreich and Work
  6. While I was reading, I noticed ...
  7. Open discussion on "Serving in Florida"

Vocab Tree

Due Monday, January 14

Provide the definition of the following words. Include the dictionary definition and a translation of the dictionary definition into your own words. Write an original sentence for each. Post one sentence as a comment.

  1. biased
  2. exculpate
  3. impartial
  4. incontrovertible
  5. integrity
  6. objectivity
  7. subjectivity
  8. penitent
  9. plausible
  10. substantiated
  11. vindicated
 

Tuesday, January 1, 2013

FYI

I just started re-reading Nickel and Dimed this evening. In the introduction, I have six sticky notes with a total of 17 notes covering 9 different rhetorical strategies (lots of ethos and diction notes, among others). It's been awhile since I've used sticky notes instead of simply writing in the book, and I'd forgotten how much it slows me down. Give yourself lots of time to read.

Also, on the very first page, Ehrenreich writes about "the roughly four million women about to be booted into the labor market by welfare reform"(Ehrenreich 1). It would be a good idea to figure out what welfare reform she's talking about and how it affected our society.

I hope you're enjoying your break! I've certainly enjoyed reading your cover letters. See you next week!