Monday, February 28, 2011

Agenda, March 1

Due Tuesday: Submission to the Lit Mag
Due Tuesday: "The Declaration of Independence" in 50 Essays
Due Wednesday: The first round of War Song Speeches.
Due Thursday: Common Place 4 
Due Thursday: Selections from Octavian Nothing
Due Thursday: More Speeches. Know your due date. Get me your lyrics two days in advance.
Due Friday: AP Registration forms
Due Monday: Synthesis Revisions. No revision without a conference with me first.


  1. Timed Write Debrief
  2. An "Independent" Quiz
  3. A Dependent Discussion
  4. Clock watchers: ask me for Octavian with 10 minutes to spare

Lit Mag Submission Guidelines

To Submit:


Send an email with your piece attached to The OCHS Literary Magazine
Include the title of your piece, your name, and your Advisory teacher’s name in the body of your e-mail.
Paste a copy of your text into the body of the e-mail as well.

Agenda, February 28

Due Now: "Outline Essay" Revisions
Due Tuesday: Submission to the Lit Mag
Due Tuesday: "The Declaration of Independence" in 50 Essays. Do you remember how to take notes on an essay?
Due Wednesday: The first round of War Song Speeches. 

Due Thursday: Common Place 4

  1. Argumentative Timed Write (55 mins)
  2. Speech Model: "The Soldiering Life"
  3. Speech Sign Ups

Friday, February 25, 2011

War Song Presentation Guidelines


These presentations should be informal but not off the cuff. I would like you to speak to your classmates rather than deliver a speech. You should rehearse what you are going to say and be prepared to answer questions, but you do not need to prepare note cards.

Please have the song available for your classmates to listen to. We'll only listen to a snippet of the song, so cue it up to the most important minute if you can. If you’ve got an mp3 player, I’ve got speakers. If you've got it on CD, we can use my laptop.  If your song has lyrics, please give me a typed copy of the lyrics two days in advance so I can photocopy them for your classmates.

Information you could include in your presentation:
  • How did you find the song? Is it a song you knew or a song you found specifically for this assignment?
  • Provide some information about the artist. Time period, style, common themes, other works, etc.
  • Tell the story of the song.
  • Was this song written as a song about war or is it a song about something else that you are interpreting as a war song?
  • How does the music and instrumentation help you/the artist argue about war?
  • MOST IMPORTANTLY, How will this song help you (and your classmates) answer the question “Is there such a thing as a just war?”

Agenda, February 25

Due Now: Vocab 6
Due Monday: "Outline Essay" Revisions

Due Tuesday: Submission to the Lit Mag
Due Tuesday: "The Declaration of Independence" in 50 Essays
Due Wednesday: The first round of War Song Speeches. I'll model in class on Monday.
Coming Monday: Argumentative Timed Write

  1. Rhetorical Analysis Timed Write (55 mins)
  2. Speech Expectations
  3. Speech Sign Ups

Thursday, February 24, 2011

Agenda, February 24

Due Fri: Vocab 6
Due Tuesday: "The Declaration of Independence" in 50 Essays
Due Wednesday: The first round of War Song Speeches. I'll model in class on Monday.
Coming Tomorrow: Rhetorical Analysis Timed Write

  1. Play, frolic, dance in the snow (if you happen to have any)
  2. Cross stuff off your "to-do" list (be sure to do it first)
  3. Be kind to your family

Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Agenda, February 23

Tomorrow: Rhetorical Analysis Timed Write
Due after the timed writes: "The Declaration of Independence" in 50 Essays


  1. Have you registered for the AP Exam? Deadline 3/4.
  2. Some are born to AP, some achieve AP, and some have AP thrust upon them
  3. Coming Next Week: War Song Speech
  4. Question 12
  5. Questions 1, 2, 8-11 

Monday, February 21, 2011

Agenda, February 22

Due Now: Poor Synthesis, revised or un-
Due Friday: Vocab 6
  1. There are more active verbs you can use.
  2. Disco Questions 1-7 in small groups.
  3. Disco Questions as a whole class.

Friday, February 18, 2011

No Legos were harmed in the making of this video

The title is an allusion to JGHG. Can you find the page?
The images are from the 1971 version of the film (which looks pretty awful, if you ask me).

The song rocks.

Discussion Questions and Exam Schedule

We'll talk about questions 1-7 on Tuesday and questions 8-13 on Wednesday. On Thursday, we'll write a timed write essay (either argument or rhetorical analysis); on Friday we'll write in the other mode.
The timed write prompts may or may not come verbatim from this list.

1. What are Trumbo’s major and minor purposes in writing Johnny Got His Gun?
2. Dalton Trumbo chooses to use punctuation inconsistently throughout the novel. Pick a moment when his use of unconventional (or conventional) punctuation is particularly conspicuous. What is the effect of his punctuation and how does this effect fit into one of Trumbo’s larger purposes? [Note: you will notice that areas that are least conventionally punctuated are richest in rhetorical devices.]
3. Select a moment where Stream of Consciousness has a particularly powerful effect. How does this effect fit into one of Trumbo’s larger purposes?
4. What is the rhetorical function of the series of memories in Chapter 2? How does it prepare the reader for the argument that follows?
5. Consider Joe’s departure from Los Angeles (pages 35-37). What is being juxtaposed in this scene? What is the effect of this juxtaposition and how does this effect fit into one of Trumbo’s larger purposes? Where else does Trumbo use juxtaposition in the novel? Are those examples similar or different to his use of juxtaposition in the departure scene?
6. Consider Trumbo’s definition of Joe’s father as a failure (last line of 103 to the middle of 107). What does this definition reveal about Trumbo’s values? How does this episode help Trumbo achieve one of his larger purposes?
7. Summarize Trumbo’s arguments against war in Chapter 10. Refute them.
8. Identify significant allusions from a variety of places in the novel. What is the effect of these allusions and how do they help Trumbo achieve his purposes?
9. Make a list of Joe’s major memories over the course of the novel. What does this list reveal about Trumbo’s values? How does Trumbo use these values to support one or more of his larger purposes?
10. An important part of Trumbo’s argument is the persona he creates to tell his story. Describe the persona. How does he craft this persona to make his argument more effective?
11. The novel is divided into two parts. How are they similar? How are they different? Why did he divide the novel the way he did?
12. What is the most interesting element of the novel that we haven’t discussed as a whole class?
13. What does the title mean?

Vocab Six


Overkill
Words for Going too Far
Due Friday, February 25

Provide the definition of the following words. Include the dictionary definition and a translation of the dictionary definition into your own words. Write an original sentence for each. Post one sentence as a comment.

1.     ebullience
2.     effusive
3.     egregiously
4.     flagrant
5.     frenetic
6.     gratuitous
7.     superfluous

Agenda, February 18

Due Now: Chapters 19 and 20
Due Now: Common Place 3

Due Tuesday, 2/22: Optional Synthesis Revision. Do not turn it in if it doesn't meet the minimums. Return your essay to me if you're done with it.

  1. Your thoughts ...?
  2. Another Christ-like figure
  3. Radio Lab. We MUST begin at 1 pm.

Thursday, February 17, 2011

Agenda, February 17

Due Now: Chapters 17 and 18
Due Tomorrow: Chapters 19 and 20
Due Friday: Common Place 3

Due Tuesday, 2/22: Optional Synthesis Revision. Do not turn it in if it doesn't meet the minimums. Return your essay to me if you're done with it.

  1. A little predictamacation / evaluation
  2. Three questions I have
  3. Three answers I have
  4. There's nothing for me to say ...

Tuesday, February 15, 2011

Agenda, February 16

Due Now: Chapters 14, 15, and 16
Due Tomorrow: Chapters 17 and 18
Due Friday: Common Place 3

Due Tuesday, 2/22: Optional Synthesis Revision. Do not turn it in if it doesn't meet the minimums. Return your essay to me if you're done with it.

  1. Rhetorical Strategies in the Assembly? 
  2. A redemptive discussion, perhaps.

Agenda, February 15

Due Now: Chapters 13 and 14
Due Tomorrow: Chapters 15 and 16
Due Friday: Common Place 3

Due Tuesday, 2/22: Optional Synthesis Revision. Do not turn it in if it doesn't meet the minimums. Return your essay to me if you're done with it.
  1. Common Reminders
  2. Allusion Quiz
  3. Chapters 13 and 14

Monday, February 14, 2011

Agenda, Singles Awareness Day

Due Now: Chapters 11 and 12
Due Tomorrow: Chapters 13 and 14
Due Friday: Common Place 3

Due Now: Develop one of your outlines into a 500-750 word essay. Your audience is the OCHS Literary Magazine staff. Include three rhetorical strategies from the Virtual Salt, underlined and labeled. Include a header.

Due Tuesday, 2/22: Optional Synthesis Revision. Do not turn it in if it doesn't meet the minimums. Return your essay to me if you're done with it.
  1. Share a rhetorical strategy.
  2. Welcome to the Grand Allusion
  3. Have we finished 1-10?
  4. Open discussion

 

Thursday, February 10, 2011

Agenda, February 11

Due Now: Vocab 5
Due Now: Chapters 9 and 10
Due Tomorrow: Chapters 11 and 12
Due Friday: Common Place 3

Due Monday, 2/14: Develop one of your outlines into a 500-750 word essay. Your audience is the OCHS Literary Magazine staff. Include three rhetorical strategies from the Virtual Salt, underlined and labeled. Include a header.
  1. Argument o' the Week - 5 minute outline
  2. Argument o' the Week - 5 minute outline #2
  3. Argument o' the Week - 10 minute discussion
  4. Chapters 7-10 ... Go!

Agenda, February 10

Due Now: Chapters 7 and 8
Due Tomorrow: Chapters 9 and 10
Due Friday: Vocab 5
Due Monday, 2/14: Develop one of your outlines into a 500-750 word essay. Your audience is the OCHS Literary Magazine staff. Include three rhetorical strategies from the Virtual Salt, underlined and labeled. Include a header.
 

  1. AP Exam Schedule
  2. Are we moving too slowly?
  3. What have we skipped in Chapters 1-6?
  4. Open discussion on 1-8

Wednesday, February 9, 2011

Agenda, February 9

Due Now: Chapters 5 and 6
Due Tomorrow: Chapters 7 and 8
Due Friday: Vocab 5
Due Monday, 2/14: Develop one of your outlines into a 500-750 word essay. Your audience is the OCHS Literary Magazine staff. Include three rhetorical strategies from the Virtual Salt, underlined and labeled. Include a header.

  1. Write a TEP paragraph about pages 35-39
  2. Did Chapter 6 help you understand Chapter 4?
  3. Quotation Fiesta!
  4. Open Discussion 1-6 

Monday, February 7, 2011

Agenda, February 8

Due Now: Chapters 3 and 4
Due Tomorrow: Chapters 5 and 6
Due Friday: Vocab 5
Due Monday, 2/14: Develop one of your outlines into a 500-750 word essay. Your audience is the OCHS Literary Magazine staff. Include three rhetorical strategies from the Virtual Salt, underlined and labeled. Include a header.

  1. What is the rhetorical purpose of Chapter 2?
  2. While I was reading, I noticed ...
  3. Three things I can contribute
  4. Point to somewhere you were confused!

Vocab Sank


You Say You Want a Revolution?
Words for the Downtrodden
Due February 11

Provide the definition of the following words. Include the dictionary definition and a translation of the dictionary definition into your own words.

1.     alienated
2.     alliance
3.     disparity
4.     servile
5.     suppressed



You are so Beautiful
Words for the Interior Decorator
Due February 11

6.     embellish
7.     florid
8.     opulent
9.     ornate
10.  ostentatious
11.  poignant

Agenda, February 7

Due Monday: C&E Outline, Multi-paragraph intro OR Interesting conclusion, topic sentences, bullet points, So What?
Due Monday: Johnny Got His Gun, Chapters 1 and 2
Due Tuesday: Chapters 3 and 4
Due Friday: Vocab 5
Due Monday, 2/14: Develop one of your outlines into a 500-750 word essay. Your audience is the OCHS Literary Magazine staff. Include three literary devices, underlined and labeled.
Include three rhetorical strategies from the Virtual Salt, underlined and labeled. Include a header.

Collect Outlines. If you are considering C&E for your final draft, put your outline in my hand.

While I was reading ... 
Three important things I can contribute are ... 
Whole class discussion

Thursday, February 3, 2011

Agenda, February 3

Due Thursday: Cause & Effect Packet. Be sure you're taking good notes.Due Thursday: Common Place #2Due Thursday: Optional Synthesis Revision.
Due Monday: C&E Outline, Multi-paragraph intro OR Interesting conclusion, topic sentences, bullet points, So What?
Due MondayJohnny Got His Gun, Chapters 1 and 2

  1. Collect Synthesis, revised and un
  2. Go get Johnny's gun
  3. Your next synthesis
  4. Stream o' Consciousness
  5. Common Place Groups
  6. C&E BS, abbreviated
  7. Pre-discussion BS
  8. Discussion

Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Agenda, February 2

Due Wednesday: Process Outline: So What?, topic sentences, two bullet points, interesting conclusion
Due Wednesday: Introduction to Cause & Effect Packet.
Due Thursday: Cause & Effect Packet. Be sure you're taking good notes.
Due Thursday: Common Place #2
Due Thursday: Optional Synthesis Revision. If you revised this weekend, show me some changes after school.

Due Monday: C&E Outline
Due Monday: Johnny Got His Gun, Chapters 1 and 2 
  1. Cause and Effect Packet Review
  2. Cause and Effect Brainstorm
  3. Rhetorical Devices Quiz 3 - bring your Virtual Salt